杏彩注册 pressure是怎样的?

杏彩注册 pressure是怎样的?

雅思大作文范文

题目

平辈工作压力针对年青人的危害.

Task: Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called “peer pressures”. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

 

构思分析:

1. 最先,同龄的工作压力会清除个性化.举例说明,在这类工作压力下,年青人一直关心,榜样和追随别人,包含了服装,口感和个人行为.这类完整性让小朋友们渐渐地丧失自我认识(self identity).

2. 同龄的工作压力还会造成年青人犯错误.举例说明,假如有队友拥有槽糕的生活方式,如抽烟,饮酒和吸食毒品得话,那麼这一年青人就会禁不住去试着,并最后成瘾.除此之外,以便听从某一团队的说白了老规矩,天确实年青人会强迫使添加某些团伙犯罪主题活动当中,如盗窃,打劫等.

3. 或许,一些适度的平辈工作压力也会给年青人的发展产生驱动力.举例说明,校园内学习培训中,来源于全班同学的优良的学习培训主要表现是1个纯天然的工作压力,会刺激性1个年青人更勤奋的上课,思索和进行工作 .除此之外,假如小伙伴们拥有去图书管的习惯性,那麼这一年青人也会被激励去学习培训与阅读.

范文:

Peer pressure refers to the influence exerted by a peer group in encouraging a person to change his or her attitudes, values, or behavior in order to conform to group norms. In my view, peers bring more negative influences on a youngster than the positive ones, and my reasons would be explored as below.

Individuality is removed. Actually, for the purpose of receiving the social acceptance, young people might consciously compel them to approve of and comply with ideas, views and behaviors of other peers, instead of obeying their inner hearts. One typical example is lifestyle. As living in groups, unconditionally catering to even-aged students and students around is the main way of young people to avoid being labeled as eccentrics, such as by blindly following their tastes of food and clothing, hairs, music and amusements like sheep.

The high vulnerability to peer pressure is a reason of youth violence and crimes. In fact, if companies have poor values and illegal behaviors, the youth would be brainwashed by the evil. For example, gravitating to young friends abusing alcohol or drugs, a youngster is very likely to try these new things, thus trapped in the addictions of unhealthy and unlawful habits. Similarly, in order to succumb to rules of a gang, a teenager would engage in social crimes, like thefts, school bullying, vandalism, arson and rape. Consequently, the ill influence from peers will ruin the life of youngsters.

Admittedly, to some extent, the influence of peers is valuable, because a moderate peer pressure can sharpen good qualities of the youth. For example, in school education, the pressure of classmates is a natural motivation for a young student to study hard. In addition, when a child knows his or her friends have a habit of reading books in library regularly, he or she will feel tempted to do so. Therefore, a positive impact of peers can help to keep a child on a right track.

In conclusion, risks from peer pressures are over the benefits. Although children can be driven by pressures of classmates to work hard in school education, the adverse effects of such pressure on depersonalizing teenagers and forming ill behaviors and illegal minds among them should never be underestimated.


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发表于 2019-09-22

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题型

“ Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic (educational), social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.”

分析 &立意

本题是1个典型性的“报导型”(report)作文题目,规定学生对某一状况或难题开展根本原因,并得出解决方案.本题是1个较为新的题型.

人们必须寻找题型中的关键字.

最先,children很重要,本题规定人们探讨的主人翁是“小孩”,因而本题尽量不要过多探讨在校大学生,更不能探讨更广泛实际意义上的“人”.

次之,题型中早已给出了“课业”(academic)、“社会发展”(social)、“钱财”(commercial)3个层级的工作压力,

因而探讨缘故的那时候最好是必须涉及到(尽管能够依据状况开展详略挑选).

范文

01

What do you think makes children unhappy today? Researchers are pointing at the pressures from various perspectives—academic, social and commercial. While the causes of these pressures seem clear enough, there are no simple measures to reduce them.

你觉得是啥让今日的小朋友们不高兴?科学研究工作人员强调是各种工作压力导致,包含学习培训、社会发展和钱财工作压力.尽管这种工作压力的缘故好像很清晰,却沒有简易的对策来降低这种工作压力.

分析

(1)本范文大全开门见山,立即提问问题(小朋友们为何工作压力愈来愈大),随后明确提出自身的见解(处理不易).

(2)point at 偏向......

(3)perspective 视角

(4)reduce 降低;缓解

02

It is easy to explain why children are facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Firstly, although as parents there are few pleasures greater than their children succeeding at school, sometimes the pressure is way too much. Parents’ unrealistically high expectations can backfire severely and end up causing their children to be unhappy. Secondly, all children have to face peer pressure in school, which is generally beneficial to kids’ growth, yet the ugly reality is that peer pressure reaches its highest intensity at just the age when children tend to be so insensitive, unkind, even cruel as to purposefully make others unhappy. Thirdly, children are easily affected by advertising that attracts them to buy things they cannot possibly afford, and as a result, they may feel unhappy.

非常容易表述为何小朋友们面临课业、社会发展和钱财工作压力.最先,虽然爸爸妈妈的较大开心就是说小孩校园内获得成功,但有时候她们释放的工作压力太已过.爸爸妈妈脱离实际的高期待值将会会得不偿失,最后造成小孩不开心.其次,全部的小孩校园内必须应对同龄的工作压力,这一般 有益于孩子成长,但丑恶的实际是,同龄工作压力超过最明显的年纪更是小朋友们不比较敏感,不友善,乃至是惨忍到蓄意让他人不高兴的年纪.最后,少年儿童非常容易遭受广告词的危害,这种广告词吸引住她们选购她们承受不起的物品,因而她们将会因此觉得不高兴.

分析

(1)本段探讨小朋友们为何遭遇各种各样工作压力,明确提出3个缘故:来源于爸爸妈妈的缘故,来源于同龄的缘故,来源于广告词的缘故,各自涉及到课业工作压力(爸爸妈妈的高期待值)、社会发展工作压力(同年龄场竞争)、钱财工作压力(广告词的危害).这种缘故不会太难想起,但请诸位涮羊肉留意范文大全在语言表达能力层面的节奏感和方法(特别是在是从句的应用).

(2)pleasure 开心;愉快

(3)way too much 太已过

(4)unrealistically 脱离实际地

(5)backfire 淬火;造化弄人

(6)end up 最后落个个......

(7)peer pressure 同龄工作压力

(8)intensity 抗压强度

(9)purposefully 有心地

(10)afford 承受的了

03

Though it is never easy to fix these feelings of unhappiness, there are possible measures to be taken to enhance the wellbeing of children who are under constant pressures. To begin with, parents have to draw a line on the expectations of their children and find out their true potentials, rather than pushing them to unrealistic limits. Meanwhile, with patience and guidance, parents should keep an eye on their children who fall victims to online pressure through social networking. Simultaneously, the authorities should do more to regulate advertising that are intended for children who are anxious to buy unnecessary things.

虽然摆脱这种不开心的觉得几乎都不易,但人们将会会采用某些对策来提升长期性处在工作压力中的小孩的优越感.最先,爸爸妈妈要给小朋友们的期待划一排,发觉她们真实的发展潜力,而并不是把她们逼上脱离实际的極限.一起,在细心和正确引导下,爸爸妈妈应当关心这些在社交媒体上承担互联网工作压力的小朋友们.一起,政府部门应当做大量的工作中来标准对于少年儿童的广告词,由于少年儿童一直急不可耐地选购并多余的物品.

分析

(1)本段探讨解决方案.一般而言,解决方案应当对于上文明确提出的缘故.这儿的解决方案有三:一、爸爸妈妈调节自身的期望值;二、警醒小孩在互联网上的队友工作压力;三、政府部门标准少年儿童广告词.这种解决方案彻底对于第四段中剖析到的3个缘故.

(2)fix 处理

(3)enhance 提升

(4)constant 长期性的

(5)potential 发展潜力(的)

(6)keep an eye on... 关心......

(7)fall victim to... 沦落......的牺牲品

(8)simultaneously 一起

04

In conclusion, there are no easy solutions to the increasing academic, social, and commercial pressures children face today. Frankly, I am quite pessimistic because those factors that bring pressures to children are not likely to go away, at least in the foreseeable future.

换句话说,针对小孩今日遭遇的日益突出的课业、社会发展和钱财工作压力,沒有非常容易的解决方案.诚恳地说,我很消极,由于这些给小朋友们产生工作压力的要素,最少在可预料的未来是不太可能消退的.

分析

(1)本段为依据段,重申观点.好的末尾段应当包含2个內容:一要对上文的小结,二是适度的拓宽.因而,好作文的末尾段一般 全是几句话构成.

(2)frankly 诚恳地说

(3)pessimistic 消极的

(4)in the foreseeable future 在看得见的将来

 What do you think makes children unhappy today? Researchers are pointing at the pressures from various perspectives—academic, social and commercial. While the causes of these pressures seem clear enough, there are no simple measures to reduce them.

It is easy to explain why children are facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Firstly, although as parents there are few pleasures greater than their children succeeding at school, sometimes the pressure is way too much. Parents’ unrealistically high expectations can backfire severely and end up causing their children to be unhappy. Secondly, all children have to face peer pressure in school, which is generally beneficial to kids’ growth, yet the ugly reality is that peer pressure reaches its highest intensity at just the age when children tend to be so insensitive, unkind, even cruel as to purposefully make others unhappy. Thirdly, children are easily affected by advertising that attracts them to buy things they cannot possibly afford, and as a result, they may feel unhappy.

Though it is never easy to fix these feelings of unhappiness, there are possible measures to be taken to enhance the wellbeing of children who are under constant pressures. To begin with, parents have to draw a line on the expectations of their children and find out their true potentials, rather than pushing them to unrealistic limits. Meanwhile, with patience and guidance, parents should keep an eye on their children who fall victims to online pressure through social networking. Simultaneously, the authorities should do more to regulate advertising that are intended for children who are anxious to buy unnecessary things.

In conclusion, there are no easy solutions to the increasing academic, social, and commercial pressures children face today. Frankly, I am quite pessimistic because those factors that bring pressures to children are not likely to go away, at least in the foreseeable future.

(310 words)


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