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Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

分析:

本题问究竟该挑选做什么工作,究竟是自身很感兴趣的工作中关键,還是好的工作关键?与别的许多话题讨论相同,这儿的探讨能够繁杂,还可以简易;能够刻骨铭心化,还可以情境创设.例如,许多人觉得,应当挑选自身很感兴趣的工作中,由于那样能够保持人生价值,从工作上找寻到满足感和成就感;而挑选好的工作则能够有利于社会发展的平稳,有利于家中的和谐.此次要为分低段同学们出示1个范文大全,看6按段优秀作文到底能够将一个话题讨论简单到何种程度.

见解:针对6按段优秀作文,观念是次之的,清楚是最关键的.怎样保证清楚表述?最重要的是要想得简易,想得立即,想得实际;避免刻骨铭心,避免兜圈,避免抽象性.针对分低段同学们而言,这类创作对策显著更非常容易保持自身的6分希望.

6分范文

Everybody has to work. The question is: which is more important in work, the job security or the job satisfaction? Some people think the job security is more important than job satisfaction, but others believe the opposite. In my view, both job security and satisfaction are important.

评价:本段为打头段,最先明确提出话题讨论,次之重述话题讨论,再度明确提出自身见解.

We all need a secure job. If we have a stable job, we can make a lot of money. Then we can buy big houses and expensive cars, and can travel all around the world. This will make our life more wonderful. If we have a stable job, we will not have to worry about losing our job. So we do not have to spend time looking for jobs. This means we can have more time to stay together with our family.

评价:本段阐述“job security"的必要性.明确提出2个原因:1)假如有平稳工作中,人们能够赚到许多钱.怎样阐述这一分论点论据呢?老雅明确提出的”大自然延续法“能够充分发挥.赚到钱后人们能够买房和车,能够到世界旅游,那样社会生活就多种多样了.2) 假如有平稳工作中,人们就无须担忧丧失工作中.大自然延续下来,不担忧丧失工作中,就多余花時间去找个工作,結果呢,人们总有時间守候亲人了.那样,用”大自然延续法“,2个原因都获得了必须的阐述,层级十分清晰,一段段写来,搞清楚准确无误.

However, it is also important to have an interesting job. If we have an interesting job, we can do our job well. Then we can get happiness from our job. If we are not interested in what we do, we can never succeed no matter how stable our job is. My uncle James is a good example. He is a middle school teacher, which is a very stable job. However, he is not really interested in teaching. As a result, he is not very successful even at his fifties.

评价:本段阐述 "job satisfaction"的必要性.明确提出一点儿原因:假如有自身很感兴趣的工作中,人们就能搞好工作中.大自然延续下来,搞好工作中,人们就能从工作上获得幸福快乐.相反,假如对自身从业的工作中不喜欢,人们就不可以取得成功.接下去,举例论证.是我一名大伯在初中当教师,工作中是平稳了,但他对课堂教学不喜欢,結果到50几岁還是失败.这儿应用的還是比较简单立即的阐述方式 .

In conclusion, I think it is the best that we have a secure and satisfying job, because this kind of job helps us to make our living and have time to stay together with our family, and at the same time succeed in our career. I wish everybody could get such a job. (271 words)

评价:依据段,最先严格执行自身的见解,并将上文的见解再次描述一下下,最终明确提出自身的希望,完毕全篇.

整体点评:文中防止了讲道理,防止了抽象性,保证了简易而清楚,立即而简单.尽管逻辑思维稍显孩子气,語言也是许多反复生涩的地区,但把自身的观念说清晰了,因而非常容易获得6分.假如英语水准太低的大学生,尝试很刻骨铭心地去写这一题型,語言苟延残喘,逻辑性错乱不堪入目,即应用出了好多个长尾词,其結果依然是4分.分低段大学生,必须要把握恰当的逻辑思维方式 和写作技巧,不必误信外边说白了创作优秀教师的机经回忆,哪些用长尾词,用繁杂句,写刻骨铭心某些,这种尽管非常好,但确实不宜你.分低段同学们不能不小心!


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1,范文

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.

To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise school work. If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and two national examinations to test students’ level of studies. Generally, only the highest 40% can go to the good quality highschools and colleges children learn as much as they can, to win the competition to obtain good quality schools.

On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and don’t help others a lot if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in? each of them are clever, however, there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. To co-operate is to improve this part. People talk and listen to what others thinking of and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co- operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.

2,难题剖析:

从论述大主题风格的视角而言,这一篇文章的最终的结束是co-operation 更关键的创立的,可是那位学生在文本总数分派上欠缺整体规划,分派给competition的文本显著超过给co- operation的,那样就给了评委1个十分有理有据的托词罚分,确实是缺憾啊!

创作提议NO.5:If it is your preference, give it more reference.

当你更认可哪个见解,你就在这一见解上多写些吧.

假如人们深化看看Body段里的关键点內容,我觉得那位学生的英语的语法功底和逻辑性论述工作能力比上边这位5分同学们也要差,可是本文把题型中的2个层面都提及,沒有犯我的NO.3提议中的不正确.此外,文本总产量上这一段文字叫上几篇常有絕對的优点,因此再注重下总数确实也很关键.

创作提议NO.6:A quantitative change causes a qualitative change.

量变产生变质.


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