Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
Everybody has to work. The question is: which is more important in work, the job security or the job satisfaction? Some people think the job security is more important than job satisfaction, but others believe the opposite. In my view, both job security and satisfaction are important.
We all need a secure job. If we have a stable job, we can make a lot of money. Then we can buy big houses and expensive cars, and can travel all around the world. This will make our life more wonderful. If we have a stable job, we will not have to worry about losing our job. So we do not have to spend time looking for jobs. This means we can have more time to stay together with our family.
评价：本段阐述“job security"的必要性.明确提出2个原因：1)假如有平稳工作中,人们能够赚到许多钱.怎样阐述这一分论点论据呢?老雅明确提出的”大自然延续法“能够充分发挥.赚到钱后人们能够买房和车,能够到世界旅游,那样社会生活就多种多样了.2) 假如有平稳工作中,人们就无须担忧丧失工作中.大自然延续下来,不担忧丧失工作中,就多余花時间去找个工作,結果呢,人们总有時间守候亲人了.那样,用”大自然延续法“,2个原因都获得了必须的阐述,层级十分清晰,一段段写来,搞清楚准确无误.
However, it is also important to have an interesting job. If we have an interesting job, we can do our job well. Then we can get happiness from our job. If we are not interested in what we do, we can never succeed no matter how stable our job is. My uncle James is a good example. He is a middle school teacher, which is a very stable job. However, he is not really interested in teaching. As a result, he is not very successful even at his fifties.
评价：本段阐述 "job satisfaction"的必要性.明确提出一点儿原因：假如有自身很感兴趣的工作中,人们就能搞好工作中.大自然延续下来,搞好工作中,人们就能从工作上获得幸福快乐.相反,假如对自身从业的工作中不喜欢,人们就不可以取得成功.接下去,举例论证.是我一名大伯在初中当教师,工作中是平稳了,但他对课堂教学不喜欢,結果到50几岁還是失败.这儿应用的還是比较简单立即的阐述方式 .
In conclusion, I think it is the best that we have a secure and satisfying job, because this kind of job helps us to make our living and have time to stay together with our family, and at the same time succeed in our career. I wish everybody could get such a job. (271 words)