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杏彩计划与缺陷 positives and negatives of public transport

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杏彩计划 positives of public transport

We need to reduce our dependence on cars

人们必须降低对小车的依赖感

Parking a car can be extremely difficult in big cities

在大都,泊车将会极为艰难.

Well-designed transport systems are comfortable and convenient

有着优良布置的道路运输系统软件既舒服又便捷.

Modern public transport can be fast and cheap

当代城公共交通便捷又划算.

Public transport can help to reduce pollution in cities

城公共交通可以协助降低大城中的环境污染.

Investment in buses and trains will ease traffic congestion

对公共汽车和列车的项目投资能够缓解交通堵塞.

Buses can be given special lanes to avoid traffic

公共汽车有单独的行车道来绕开车子.

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Public transport is often slow and unreliable

城公共交通一般 比较慢,并且不太靠谱.

Metro systems and trains are often dirty and crowded

地铁站系统软件和列车一般 又脏又拥堵.

People feel like “sardines in a can”

大家觉得好像水果罐头里的金枪鱼相同.

Cars are much more comfortable

私家轿车要舒适许多.


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一、提前准备工作中

*立意

1-难题是啥?

题目最先叙述了背景图,有的专家指出小孩应当从中小学并非初中就刚开始学习英语,而真实的难题是,让小孩在中小学(并非初中)就刚开始接纳外国语文化教育的优势是不是超过缺陷?具体是必须想去剖析那样做的优点和缺点,随后将其开展较为.

2-另一半及范畴?

题目中叙述的很清晰,另一半即是children, 而探讨的范畴则是对于learning a foreign language in primary school 和learning a foreign language in secondary school.必须将这2个的优点和缺点开展比照.

3-题目?

这个题归属于见解类的题目,想要你得出优点和缺点,并开展较为.

*见解提前准备

参照顾家北教师的ABC训练法,对于题目开展剖析,明确创作的逻辑性.这个题应当是明确了A,必须人们填补B和C

A(中小学就刚开始开展外国语文化教育)-B(学习培训的時间更充足)-C(尽快掌握外语,做好基本)

A(初中刚开始开展外国语文化教育)-B(受汉语逻辑思维的危害)-C(学习效率不太好)

*语汇提前准备

请在Google中检索 “foreign language learning” “children” “school” 等关键字.阅读文章百度搜索,积淀与主题风格有关语汇及表述.

二、规范一——Task Response

这一整规范下又细分为4个小的评定标准:

1-All parts of topic are responded to well

段1:children相匹配题目children/ begun learning foreign languages相匹配题目begin learning a foreign language/ at secondary school, introduce them earlier, educational authorities or individual schools相匹配题目primary school和secondary school/ some educationalists相匹配题目some experts/ both positive and negative outcomes相匹配题目advantages 和disadvantages

段2: young children相匹配children (at primary school)/ adolescents 相匹配children ( at secondary school)/ pick up languages, learning another language相匹配learning a foreign language.

段3: the primary timetable 相匹配at primary school/ learning other languages相匹配learning a foreign language.

段4:disadvantages相匹配disadvantages/ primary school teachers相匹配at primary school/ primary language teaching相匹配learning a foreign language at primary school/ secondary schools相匹配secondary school.

段5:language learning相匹配learning a foreign language/ earlier exposure to language learning 相匹配learning a foreign language at primary school/ young children相匹配children.

2-All parts of questions are responded to well

题目的难题是让小孩在中小学就刚开始接纳外国语文化教育的优势是否不必要缺陷?即必须各自列举优势与劣势,一起将其开展比照.

段2:The obvious argument in its favor is that...; 段3:The greater flexibility...各自是对那样做以后多造成的积极主动危害,即优势的阐述.

段4:There are,however, some advantages.是对其缺陷,不够的阐述.句13明确提出这种缺陷是能够摆脱的,说明自身的见解觉得优势超过缺陷.

一起在段4对缺陷的阐述中对比以前对优势的阐述,开展比照,比如:..., the flexibility referred above is diminished.

段5: 说明自身的见解适用自小触碰学习外语,必须水平上回应了难题,觉得优势超过缺陷.

因此,杏彩直播大全对难题的每个一部分都作出了答复.

3-main ideas are clear

稿子的行为主体段应当是段2,3,4.人们各自找她们的main idea.

段2:main idea 应当是句3 The obvious argument in its favour...适用小孩从中小学就刚开始学习英语的1个见解就是说少年儿童比青少年儿童更非常容易习得語言.

段3:main idea 是句5,The greater flexibility...中小学日程安排的协调能力能够出示小孩大量的時间触碰外国语,进而保证她们对学习语言的激情及其点能获得的发展.

段4:main idea是句8,点出带好几个disadvantages.

4-Explanation/ examples of main ideas are clear

人们仍然对行为主体段开展剖析.

段2的逻辑性:句3 main idea,明确提出少年儿童比青少年儿童更非常容易习得語言.句4则是对句3的表述,由于在哪个环节,少年儿童还要学习培训汉语,能够推动她们对外国语的接受学习培训.

段3的逻辑性:句5 main idea,明确提出中小学的日程安排更为富裕,让小孩不断进步,一起维持学习培训的激情.句6,7 填补表明初期的学习外语推动她们今后的学习语言和发展趋势,一起加重她们对别的文化艺术的掌握.

段4的逻辑性:句8 最先转折点刚开始探讨disadvantages. 句9明确提出不够将会取决于小学教师将会不具有技术专业的語言课堂教学工作能力.句10 呼应段3,导入权威专家即对段3 的flexibility这一优势开展否认,句9难题无法用此方式 处理.句11,12 则是对将会造成的不良影响的论述.句13 However, 再此转折点,明确提出这种将会的难题全是能够被处理的,必须水平上说明创作者的见解,觉得优势超过缺陷.

三、规范二——Cohesion and Coherence

在这一规范下,又细分化了好多个小规范.

归属于Cohesion的有:

-good overall structure

-the first paragraph clearly introduces the essay

-topic sentences introduce paragraphs well

-clear central topic within each paragraph

-logical paragraph development

归属于Coherence的有:

-linking phrases are used well

*从而人们能够看得出,尽管大部分雅思写作教师在讲CC时把着重点放到了linking phrases上,可事实上,在细分化的得分选中,cohesion比coherence更关键.

带著这种因素,人们回过头看来杏彩直播大全:

1-Good well structure

杏彩直播大全的逻辑性是很清楚的.

段1:叙述背景图,说明在中小学就刚开始接纳学习外语得话具有优势又有缺陷.

段2,3 :对那样做优势的阐述,涉及到了适用小孩从中小学就刚开始学习英语的根本原因及其会造成的結果2个层面.

段4:句8 however转折点,从段2,3 对优势的叙述衔接到对缺陷的叙述.阐述全过程呼应段3,句13又明确提出这种缺陷是能够处理的,说明了创作者觉得优势超过缺陷的心态.

段5:开展小结.立即说明见解初期学习英语更有益于对語言及其文化艺术的把握.

2-The first paragraph clearly introduces the essay

句1是呼应题目背景图的叙述,句2明确提出那样做具有优势又有缺陷,找出下面对优势与劣势的叙述.

3-Topic sentences introduce paragraphs well

对行为主体段开展剖析.

段2:句3即是main idea, 明确提出了小孩在少年儿童环节更为非常容易语言学习.阐述了适用小孩从中小学就刚开始学习英语的1个根本原因.

段3:句5同是main idea,对倘若那样做以后,造成的积极主动危害来阐述它的优势.

段4:句8为main idea,刚开始继而阐述disadvantages.

4-Clear central topic within each paragraph

这一点儿与以前的main idea类似.

段2:The obvious argument in its favour...适用小孩从中小学就刚开始学习英语的1个见解就是说少年儿童比青少年儿童更非常容易习得語言.从根本原因上剖析了小孩自小刚开始学习英语的益处.

段3:The greater flexibility...中小学日程安排的协调能力能够出示小孩大量的時间触碰外国语,进而保证她们对学习语言的激情及其点能获得的发展.将会造成的积极主动危害上边阐述那样做的优势.

段4:Primary school teachers...小学教师通常重视掌握各个方面的专业知识,因此将会欠缺技术专业的語言课堂教学工作能力.从小学教师的工作能力层面剖析缺陷.

5-Logical paragraph development

段1:背景图叙述,找出话题讨论.

段2,3:对让小孩从中小学刚开始学习英语的优势的叙述.

段4: 阐述缺陷.句8转折点,从段2,3 探讨优势继而探讨缺陷.句13,说明自身的心态,觉得这种缺陷是能够处理的,因此优势超过缺陷.

段5:小结,再度说明自身的见解.

6-Linking phrases are used well

段1:Traditionally, (副词做状语)children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, (呼应题目,children,learning a foreign language, secondary school) but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.(but 转折点,them代指foreign languages,earlier呼应题目primary school, educationalists呼应experts)This policy(代指introducing them earlier)..., with both positive and negative outcomes.(呼应advantages, disadvantages,找出对优点和缺点的阐述)

段2:The obvious argument in its favour( its 代指begin learning a foreign language at primary school) is that young children(代指children at primary school) ...than teenagers(代指children at secondary school). Their brains are...(Their 代指young children), which facilitates learning another language,(呼应learning a foreign language) and unlike adolescents, (呼应teenagers)they are not ...(they 代指young children)

段3:...of the primary timetable(呼应 at primary school)..., thus maintaining...(thus描述因果报应)Their command of the language...(Their代指前边learners)from this early exposure,(early exposure代指learning a foreign language at primary school) while learning...(while表达此外)They may also...(They 代指learners,also表达填补,也)

段4:There are, however, some disadvantages.( There be句式,however转折点)Primary school teachers...(呼应primary school) If specialists(对比experts)have..., the flexibility referred to above...(呼应段3,进行否认)If primary language teaching is ...(呼应learning a foreign language at primary school), secondary schools could be ...(呼应secondary school)(虚拟语气)There is no advantage(There be 句式,呼应advantages)if enthusiastic primary pupils...(呼应段3 maintaining learners’ enthusiasm, primary pupils 呼应children at primary school)However, (转折点)these issues(呼应句9-12)can be addresses strategically within the policy(代指让小孩从中小学刚开始学习英语)adopted.(说明见解,觉得优势超过缺陷)

段5:Anything which (定语从句)encourages language learning(呼应learning a foreign language)..., and early exposure(呼应以前exposure,代指learning a foreign language at primary school) to language learning contributes to this. (this 代指benefits society culturally and economically) Young children’s ...make these benefits more achievable.(benefits 呼应benefits society culturally and economically)

四、规范三——Lexical Resources

一样,此项评定标准下也细分化了4个小规范

-appropriate word choices

-control of word endings/forms

-repetition is avoided

-spelling is correct

这4个规范,大量是错误即罚分的方式,因此人们只来做比较抽象性的分析.

1-appropriate word choices

这这项规范包括2个层面:

不仅是配搭是不是正宗,即col//location.href(词伙)的应用是不是恰当.这就规定人们在学习培训英语单词时以词伙为企业开展记忆力,多关心配搭,而并不是简易地背英语单词.与此同时是词义、语域是不是适当.语域可分成中性化、宣布、非正规的,又可分为英语口语和书面语言.雅思写作中规定的是中性化或宣布的书面语言.人们能够看见杏彩直播大全中是沒有非正规的或口语化的表述出現的.

2-control of word endings/forms

这一点儿不仅就是指不一样词性的娴熟变换和运用.与此同时,专有名词的单复数末尾、形容词的各种各样方式,也在该规范的考虑范围内.

比如:benefit (n/v)--benefits society & make these benefits more achievable

Enthusiasm- enthusiastic

3-repetition is avoided

那条规范是人们广为人知的,替换成词的应用.

人们举某些杏彩直播大全中的替换成表述:

Children: young children, teenagers, adolescents, learners, primary pupils

Learning a foreign language: studying languages, pick up languages, learning another language, learning other languages, language learning

Learning a foreign language at primary school: early exposure to language learning, primary language teaching

Benefits society culturally and economically: these benefits

Advantages, disadvantages: positive and negative outcomes, the obvious argument in its favour

4-spelling is correct

不必多言,除开平常训练后可找同学/教师批阅外,还可以把文字键入电脑上查验.

五、规范四——Grammatical Range and Accuracy

人们看来最终这项评定标准,都是加盟规范中的奠基石:Grammatical Range and Accuracy.很显而易见,此项规范中分成两类:grammatical range和grammatical accuracy,又能够细分化为:

Grammatical range中:

-a variety of sentence structures are used

Grammatical accuracy中:

-articles

-sentence structures are correct

-punctuation is correct

人们来各自看一下这好多个细分化规范.

1-a variety of sentence structures are used

有关英语的语法的几大规范中,grammatical range是较为难掌握的,也没办法用几句话说清晰.人们只能根据不断剖析杏彩直播大全来揣测.在首篇的剖析中,人们只作简单句/并列句和繁杂句的区别.

[打头段]句1:并列句

句2:简单句

[行为主体段1]句3:繁杂句

句4:并列句套繁杂句

[行为主体段2]句5:繁杂句

句6:繁杂句

句7:简单句

[行为主体段3]句8:简单句

句9:并列句

句10:繁杂句

句11:繁杂句

句12:繁杂句

句13:简单句

[总环节]句14:并列句套繁杂句

句15: 简单句

能够看得出,全文繁杂句和简单句更替应用.杏彩直播大全多应用繁杂句,可是行为主体段2,3 应用简单句末尾,行为主体段3用简单句开展转折点,简单明了,承揽大自然.

2-Articles

冠词的恰当应用.看起来很关键点,我觉得很关键.

3-sentence structures are correct

语法的准确性在英语的语法得分中占有率很高,假如有几句左右语法错误,英语的语法分非常容易降至5.5下列.因此请大伙儿优先选择保证语法恰当,再去追求完美句型的多元性和多元性.

4-punctuation is correct

雅思作文中一般 不出現疑问句和感叹句,因此最常见的标点符号就是说逗号和句号,分号和引号有时候应用.一般 句号的应用不容易不太好,但逗号的用法总有较为多的说道,必须在学习培训英语的语法和积淀词伙使用方法时多留意.


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野生动物园的优势与缺陷 positives and negatives of zoos

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杏彩最新消息 Positives of Zoos

Zoos paly an important role in wildlife conservation

野生动物园在野生动物保护上充分发挥关键功效.

They can help to protect endangered species

她们可以协助维护稀有动物.

Zoos allow scientists to study animals and their behavior

野生动物园使生物学家可以科学研究小动物及其他们的个人行为.

Zoos are educational, interesting and fun

野生动物园颇具文化教育实际意义,有趣,而且很好玩儿.

Children, in particular, enjoy learning about animals

特别是在是小孩喜爱掌握小动物.

Zoos provide job opportunities.

野生动物园出示工作中机遇.

杏彩开户 Negatives of Zoos

Zoo animals are kept in artificial environments

野生动物园的小动物被饲养在人工服务自然环境中.

They are kept in cages or have limited space

他们被关进铁笼里或是只能不足的主题活动室内空间.

Zoo animals rely on humans, this article is from Laokaoya website

野生动物园里的小动物依靠人们.

They lose the freedom to hunt for food

她们沒有扑食的随意.

The best way to save endangered species is by protecting natural habitats.

解救稀有动物最好是的方法是维护大自然栖息的地方.

Some people believe that zoos are unethical

某些人觉得野生动物园是不诚实的.

Zoos exhibits animals with the aim of making money

野生动物园怀着挣钱的目地展现小动物.

We have no right to use animals for entertainment and profit.

人们沒有支配权用小动物去游戏娱乐或是赢利.


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